describe a graph that shows average growth in domestic products in wealthy countries, globalisers and non-globalisers.

describe a graph that shows average growth in domestic products in wealthy countries, globalisers and non-globalisers.
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demonstrates the average
rate
of domestic products in different
nations
, categorized into three groups, wealthy countries, globalisers and
non-globalisers
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non-globalised
. As it's obvious from the graph, wealthy
nations
reached the highest average
rate
, about 5% in
1960s
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,
however
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they experienced a significant drop between
1960s
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and 1990s and fell to 2%.
On the other hand
, developing countries that had a global approach
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had an upward trend during
this
period and growth from about 1% to nearly 5%.
this
nation reached the highest
rate
of domestic products among two other
nations
in
1990s
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the 1990s
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. we can infer from the graph that the GDP
rate
in developing countries adopting a non-global approach, fluctuated during
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and they showed their top production
rate
in
1970s
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the 1970s
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.
Also
, it is noticeable that
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that time, all three
nations
had
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about
same
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GDP. In conclusion, as the graph illustrates, adopting a global approach to business will improve
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domestic
productions
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rate, nations with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • domestic products
  • wealthy countries
  • globalisers
  • non-globalisers
  • average growth
  • graph
  • trends
  • economies
  • advanced technology
  • globalization
  • global trade
  • integration
  • slow growth rate
  • participation
  • economic growth
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