2. Human activities have negative effects on plant and animal species. Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem. Others believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give our opinion.

It is undoubtedly true that some of our activities have a harmful
effect
on our
planet
. While some people believe that nothing can be done to solve the negative impact of human activity on the
wildlife
, I strongly argue that several measures can be taken to solve the problem.
To begin
with, some people are of the opinion that the damaging
effect
of some of our activities on the
wildlife
cannot be resolved.
This
, in their opinion, is because many
species
of plants and animals have already disappeared from our world and it is impossible to get them back.
For example
, in 2013, a United Nations study found out that several
species
disappeared from our ecosystem because of
deforestation
.
This
clearly shows the depth of the bad effects that our activities have on the
wildlife
. So, in these people’s opinions, nothing can be done to reverse the problem.
Nevertheless
, there are many measures that the governments and individuals can take to stop the negative
effect
that our activities have on our
planet
.
First
of all, governments around the world must come together to address the issue of
deforestation
.
This
is because it is the main cause of the disappearance of endangered
species
.
For example
, the South African government outlawed
deforestation
in 2015 and since
then
the results have been impressive as many
species
have been saved from extinction and soil erosion has been stopped.
As a result
, the endangered
species
now have no disruption in their habitats and the production of crops has increased. Individuals can
also
spread awareness about the destructive
effect
that some of our activities have on the
planet
. Obviously there are still many more things that we can do to address the issue. To sum up, I definitely maintain that governments and individuals can do several things to stop human activity that has damaging effects on our
planet
. Outlawing
deforestation
and spreading awareness amongst people about the need to protect
wildlife
are the actions that need to be taken.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • deforestation
  • pollution
  • climate change
  • extinction
  • reforestation
  • conservation programs
  • environmental laws
  • ecosystems
  • technological advances
  • awareness
  • interconnectivity
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem services
  • preserving
  • wildlife
  • mitigate
  • empowering
  • economic and social benefits
  • incentives
  • conservation efforts
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