The chart below shows the changes in car ownership in Great Britain between 2000 and 2010
The line chart provided shows some striking differences in the number of
cars
used in the UK between 2000 and 2010. It is clear that
the number of people used
single or more Correct pronoun usage
who used
then
two Replace the word
than
cars
increased during the period while
those who have no car
decreased considerably. In 2000 there were approximately 65% of people who
did not have Correct pronoun usage
apply
car
to travel, about Add an article
a car
the car
one
Add a hyphen
one-third
third
had one
car
and no one
had two or more cars
. However
, next
ten years Correct article usage
the next
shows
significant changes in Correct subject-verb agreement
show
car
ownership. The percentage of people had
no Correct pronoun usage
who had
car
dropped dramatically about
35% in 2001, a decline Change preposition
by about
about
29%. Change preposition
of about
In contrast
, more then
two Replace the word
than
cars
increased steeply to somewhere in the vicinity of 15% and then
doubled in 2008. Finally
, the percentage of one
Add a hyphen
one-car
car
users experienced some remarkable fluctuation. The trend went up sharply and reached a peak of 50% in 1981 before decreasing slowly during the next
ten years. Contributes to one
car
overtook those with no auto and became the highest for all car
owners.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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