What are the advantages/disadvantages of rising number of population

Nowadays the
number
of people have been increasing
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this
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creates
a few disadvantages which are
pollution
, unemployment and property shortage. The main disadvantage of r
ising
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the rising number
number
of people on the planet is
p
ollution
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polluted
.
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.
People all over the world want to use numerous goods which a
re generally damage
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are generally damaging
are generally damaged
have generally damaged
our earth like deodorants, cars and plastic bags. As the
number
of people increases the use of the goods accrue due to fact that we face a
pollution
problem. Another drawback of overpopulation is unemployment. People have to work to survive
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,
thus
with rising p
opulation they
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population, they
struggle to find j
ob.
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jobs
To illustrate, e
mployer
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the employer
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prefers
to c
hose
go after with the intent to catch
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mployees which
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employees, which
are f
amiliar each other
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familiar to each other
because of that other people cannot find a job.
Also
business areas are limited so people do not work a
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on
at
organization.
Finally
, the
last
d
esadvantage
the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position
disadvantage
is property shortage. There are many apartments in the world. When the
number
of people rise, the needs for apartments is increasing owing to f
act
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the fact
that natural areas are decreasing because of insufficient space. According to some researchers natural areas where there are too many people are almost nonexistent due to urbanization. In conclusion, there are several disadvantages of increasing
number
of people. These are
p
ollution,
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polluted
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,
acancy and inadequate space. I think that these problems can be solved by managers through some rules.

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