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In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Health
 is a very crucial matter when it comes to human beings. Diet is an important factor affecting one’s
health
. In some countries, more and more people are suffering from
health
 problems
as a result
 of eating too much fast
food
. Due to
this
 matter, some people believe that it is necessary for governments to impose a higher
tax
 on
this
 kind of
food
,
although
 some
also
 disagree. These two
point
Suggestion
points
 of
views
Suggestion
view
 will be
further
 discussed
on
Suggestion
in
 the following paragraphs. Some people strongly believe that the
government
 should impose a higher
tax
 on fast
food
, to decrease the number of consumers. Fast
food
 affects one’s
health
 negatively.
Therefore
, decreasing the consumption of fast
food
 will lead to a better diet and
health
.
As a result
, there will be less cases of
health
 problems caused by
overconsumption
 of fast
food
. Another perspective implies that
such
 thing is unnecessary. People consume fast
food
 because it is quick serving and filling, not because the price is cheap. Increasing
tax
 will not decrease the number of people suffering from
health
 problems. It will only bring damage to fast
food
 companies’ economy, and
also
 mess up low income workers’ diet even more. To sum it up, both perspectives have their own advantage and
disadvantage
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disadvantages
.
However
, I strongly believe it is unnecessary for the
government
 to increase
tax
 on fast
food
. One’s diet is his/her own responsibility that does not depend on whether or not the
government
 increases the
tax
.
In addition
, the advantages of not increasing
tax
 outweighs the opposite perspective. In conclusion, I strongly believe that it is unnecessary for the
government
 to increase
tax
 on fast
food
.

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