The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
diagram is highlighting the inland before and after construction. Were touriust
could get provisions.
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tourist
tourists
Overall
, the most important change in island
after Add an article
the island
an island
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its establisment
establisment
. Before raising the Correct your spelling
establishment
island
was desolate
Before Establisment
of Correct your spelling
Establishment
island
. The Add an article
the island
island
was desolated there was no human
could come there to Fix the agreement mistake
humans
spent
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spend
thair
life or Correct your spelling
their
yor
holidays because there was Correct your spelling
your
not
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no
accomodation
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accommodation
facility
was
provided. Unnecessary verb
apply
Moreover
, There was qiute
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quite
diffieult
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difficult
to
food Change preposition
in
in
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on
desolated
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the desolated
island
. Because to find food alon
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alone
in
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on
island
there would be chances of dangerous Add an article
the island
animls
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animals
was
too risky. And the main need is Correct subject-verb agreement
were
water
for every living thing and sea
has salty Correct article usage
the sea
water
so its
difficult to separate salt from Correct your spelling
it's
water
. If tourist would drink sea water
without purify
it can Change the form of the verb
purifying
be suffer
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suffer
the
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apply
in
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from
dihydration
but there Correct your spelling
dehydration
wre
some advantages of Correct your spelling
were
are
island
before construction which was clean air, less pollution, Add an article
the island
control
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and control
in
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of
climat
chances.
After the Correct your spelling
climate
establisment
of Correct your spelling
establishment
island
. It's easier to live there. people can easily go there Add an article
the island
for
spend their holidays and can give quality time Change preposition
to
to
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with
thier
family. Correct your spelling
their
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, the biggest need of every vacation is food. people love to enjoy Correct your spelling
Moreover
foods
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food
varities
from Correct your spelling
varieties
varies
diffrent
places. After Correct your spelling
different
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the establisment
establisment
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establishment
Resturnent
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Restaurant
facility
has provided
to people. Add a missing verb
been provided
In
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Island
island
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the island
accomdation
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accommodation
facility
and beach
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a beach
facility
for swimming provided
t Add a missing verb
are provided
tourist
.Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
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