The bar graph below shows about the ampunt of virus affected
The bar chart provides information about the virus case in ASEAN.
Singapore
had the highest amount of cases, while
Laos had the least total of cases. Indonesia
is the second
highest with the
total Correct article usage
a
11.396
cases. The table shows the Change preposition
of 11.396
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
people
that confirmed, death
and recovered In three different regions of Replace the word
died
Indonesia
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the bar chart, Singapore
was the
high rise Change preposition
on the
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followed
Indonesia
, Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand, Vietnam, Myanmar, Brunei, Cambodia and last
but not least Laos with the lowest number of affected people
.Singapore
and Indonesia
only got a slight different
whilst Replace the word
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Singapore
and Laos got a big difference.
The table shows that Jakarta had the highest amount of confirmed and dead people
, whereas
east Java
had the lowest number of affected and dying people
. East Java
and West Java
only got a slight difference of
confirmed Change preposition
in
people
, on the other
hand
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,hand
death
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dead
people
in West Java
was the least from
the three other regions.Change preposition
among
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