During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter • remind him when and where you met • tell him what kind of job you are interested in • say why you think you would be suitable for the job

Dear Sir, My name is Onyinye Biose and I was the lady with the blonde hair that sat
next
to you on your trip back from Canada
last
week Thursday. We both flew the economic class from Kano Airport and my discussion with you made my journey worthwhile. During our talk you gave me an open invitation to work in one of your restaurants,
this
is an offer that came to me on a platter of gold as I have always been keen
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working in a multinational eatery as a chef because it will give me the opportunity to explore the different types of continental dishes and
also
show forth my exorbitant cookery talent. With my 4 years of catering
experience
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I think am the best candidate for the senior chef position you told me about. I
also
hold a Bachelor degree and a diploma certificate in catering, I have worked in a
five star
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hotel and
also
at two different restaurants
were
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I worked both as a supervisor and subordinate. Attached is my resume as I await a
favorable
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response from you, I am
also
available for
further
interview and questioning. Yours faithfully, Onyinye Biose

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • chain of restaurants
  • potential job opportunity
  • relevant experience
  • managerial role
  • customer service
  • qualifications
  • certifications
  • unique skills
  • eagerness
  • admiration
  • resume
  • references
  • face-to-face meeting
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