The table below shows CO2 emissions for different forms of transport in the European Union. The Pie Chart shows the percentage of European Union funds being spent on different forms of transport. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The table below shows CO2 emissions for different forms of transport in the European Union. The Pie Chart shows the percentage of European Union funds being spent on different forms of transport.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The two charts display the amount of carbon dioxide
emissions
for different modes of transport and the percentage of funds of the Europen Union that are being spent on various transportation modes. We get a very clear picture from both
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figures. We get to know that passenger cars are the main cause of CO2
emissions
per passenger kilometre and the
Europen
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Union spent more than half of its funds on road transportation between 2007 and 2013. The bar graph shows that cars contribute to almost one hundred and
twenty five
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grams of CO2 emission per passenger kilometre
emissions
.
While
coaches are responsible for
three quarters
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of a century
grams
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of CO2
emissions
. Buses lie somewhere between the two mentioned forms of transport. In the pie chart, the
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observation is that the European Union, from 2007 to 2013, spent a little more than half of its funds on road transportation. The EU
also
spent almost
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third
of it on railways,
the
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remaining 17% was spent on
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other modes of transport like inland waterways and ports. Airports contributed to only 1% of the entire budget of the EU in those six years.
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