The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents.
The bar graph illustrates the average number of
car
journeys
per day in the city centre divided by residents and non-residents
between 1996 and 2005.
Overall
, it can be seen that the resident
Correct quantifier usage
number of resident
car
travellers
were
decreased numbers rather than Unnecessary verb
apply
non-residents
Change the noun form
non-resident
car
journeys
increased total
during the whole period.
In 1996, the number of Change preposition
in total
car
journeys
had below 10000 per day made by resident
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residents
however
, almost half number
of the Correct article usage
the number
journeys
had made by non-residents
. After following
three years, Correct article usage
the following
resident
car
travellers
were almost same
Correct article usage
the same
while
non-resident
car
journeys
were
increased trend and Unnecessary verb
apply
which
had more than 8000 Correct pronoun usage
apply
journeys
per day in 1999.
In early 2000, parking meters introduced
into the city centre and Add a missing verb
were introduced
that
time in Change preposition
at that
a
city, local Correct article usage
the
travellers
had almost half means 5000 journeys
had slightly decreased as compared to 1999 travellers
. After than
both Correct word choice
that
journeys
which same in
until Change preposition
apply
to
2002.
In late 2002, Change preposition
apply
westage
street and pork late closed to traffic. In 2003, both Correct your spelling
wastage
are
Unnecessary verb
apply
journeys
had drastically decreased, residents car
journeys
were made in 4000, whereas
others had 3000. Until 2005, resident
traffic slightly
up or down, rather Add a missing verb
was slightly
non-residents
traffic had Change the noun form
non-resident
also
remain increase
and in 2005 Wrong verb form
increased
which
had approximately 5000 per Correct pronoun usage
it
days
.Fix the agreement mistake
day
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Vocabulary: Replace the words car, journeys, non-residents, resident, travellers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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