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Nowadays the way people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationship that people make? Has this been positive or negative development?

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Without a doubt, these days, many people are interacting with one another has changed a lot because of an improvement in
technology
. In my opinion,
although
 the
communication
 has been improved a lot than earlier, which is a positive
development
, many children and adults are being less sociable
that is
 a negative
development
. On the one hand, with the advancement of
technology
,
communication
 has become very easier than earlier. In the past, if people wanted to send a message to their loved one, they would send it through the post and could take several months to reach.
However
, these days, people can send a message to their friends or other family members, by using applications
such
 as, Facebook, Instagram or Whatsup, that reaches instantly and save the time of receiver and sender.
Likewise
, with the help of these applications, the majority of people can do video calling even though living far distance or from any corner with the help of the
internet
.
Hence
, these benefits of
communication
 are possible due to
technology
, in my view, which is a positive trend.
On the other hand
, because of
technology
, many people have become less socialized.
This
 is because many children play games on the
internet
 during their leisure time
such
 as PubG, which is a very popular game these days among them;
hence
, they often do not go outside and play.
As a result
, they become obese and have very few friends in the community.
Similarly
, many adults are continuously checking their emails, updates and messages on social media and watching movies on the
internet
, which make them don't go outside with their family members for outing and not knowing their neighbours too.
This
 all negative is due to
technology
, in my opinion, is a negative
development
. In conclusion, I believe,
although
 with the help of advancement in
technology
 the
communication
 with our family members and friends have become easier due to video calling
that is
 a positive trend, many children do not go outside to play and adults enjoy their leisure time on the
internet
, that makes them less social, which is a negative
development
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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