The guide beneath is of the town of Garlsdon. Another store (S) anticipated the town. The guide demonstrate two conceivable locales for the store.

The map illustrates two separated sides for building a new grocery store in the metropolis of Garlsdon which population consists of 65000 citizens. Overall, marked two sides of the city for the store is located in the north-west and the middle of the municipality centre. More specifically, the
first
conceivable place for the store which is marked with the S is situated in the northwest near the railway station in the countryside in the city. The two main roads passed it from the right sides of the stock which connects 10000 populations of the Handon with 29000 people of the Cransdon. There is 12 km to Handon and 25 km to Cransdon. The
second
considered placed in the market, which is marked with S2 is located in the middle of the township centre in the south near the huge industry. The main road is passed it which can connect Cranston citizens with 15000 Bransdon people and there are 16 km to Bransdon.
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