Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced.

Today, every country around the word has a common
problem
with increasing amount of
garbage
. These
garbage
produce
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produces
is produced
in many ways and unfortunately, have
bad effect
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a bad effect
on
ecosystem
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the ecosystem
ecosystems
. If governments and individuals do not try to reduce
this
problem
, in
future
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the future
we have more problems. There are many reasons for
increasing amount
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the increasing amount
an increasing amount
increasing amounts
of
rubbish
.
First
of all, today, we have more population than the past.
This
overpopulation produces more
garbage
.
Secondly
, as we know nature can absorb all natural things
such
as foods, vegetables, dead body and so on. All these kind of
garbage
are
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is
good for nature, but today we
use
some material like
plastic's
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plastic
bag and nature cannot absorb plastic. We
use
more and more unnatural elements.
In addition
, people become more consumer than the past. In the past people try to find a new way to
use
all old stuff, but now we
just looking
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are just looking
just look
for new and better devices. We do not like reuse old
device especially
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device, especially
old electronic device, so just
throw out them
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throw them out
. In my opinion, government should better start to reduce
rubbish
. They can do it in some simple ways. One of these ways is, teach people to reduce
using
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use
of unnatural material and replace them with something else.
For example
, we can
use
paper bag
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paper bags
a paper bag
instead
of plastic bag in supermarkets.
Also they
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Also, they
can teach people to dividing their
rubbish
into natural parts, bottle part and so on.
Consequently
, all natural material can
reuse
move upward
rise
again. To sum up, in my opinion, both governments and individuals must pay more attention to reducing
rubbish
.
Rubbish
is a big treat for our ecosystem. It causes a lot of
problem
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problems
such
as increasing some disease, increasing pollution, so we must collaborate with governments to solve
this
problem
.

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