The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart gives information about the proportion of places visited by three different groups of
people
in Canada
.
Overall
, what stands out from the chart is that those who are either from English-speaking countries
or born in Canada
prefers
going cinema Change the verb form
prefer
while
migrants from other countries
tend to visit library
. For all groups, the least favourite place is Add an article
the library
theatre
.
In terms of cinema, 70% of the local Canadians go to the cinema , which is a fifth higher than the new migrants from other Correct article usage
the theatre
countries
. This
is followed by the new migrants from English - speaking countries
about 65%. As we can see at theatre
, Add an article
the theatre
this
place is unpopular in Canada
with a minority of people
from other countries
visiting here which is just a
half of Canadian theatre-goers . Correct article usage
apply
Similar
pattern can be seen in Add an article
A similar
zoo
, most of the visitors are from English-speaking nations and Add an article
a zoo
original
Change the word
originally
Canada
with 50% and 42% respectively Change preposition
from Canada
while
those who
from other nations occupy Correct pronoun usage
apply
for
35% of the total visitors
Change preposition
up
Library
is the Add an article
The library
second
place that people
from other countries
go to. It is clear that
a little more than half of new migrates
born in other Replace the word
migrants
countries
choose Correct article usage
the library
library
to spend their time, Fix the agreement mistake
libraries
while
40% of English-speaking migrates
and 35% of Replace the word
migrants
people
born in Canada
like to spend their time in Add an article
the library
library
.Fix the agreement mistake
libraries
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