The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The line graph illustrates the total tally of enquiries that have

done

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by the tourist information office

in

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a

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method of inviting in person and by letter or email or telephone in a particular city from January to June

especially

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in 2011. During January, the highest number of enquiries had been done by telephone and

then

it started falling and rising till march, after that it remained relatively stable for

next

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one

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month,

finally

it has shown

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improvement from after April to June. The enquiries in person were the least in January approximately 400, and

then

it started steadily rising to almost

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the triple

count

at the end

of the period. The decent

count

was recorded by letter or email,

initially

, it started with an acceptable

count

and

then

it was marginally falling till March and dramatically fell from approximately 700 to 400 between March to April and it showed similar results after April.

Overall

,

although

initially

enquiring in person

was

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seemed to be having the lowest

count

but

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eventually, it outnumbered

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others, which was as opposed to the enquiry by telephone

count

.