the diagram below shows the life cycle of a lady bird and its anatomy

the diagram below shows the life cycle of a lady bird and its anatomy
The diagram depicts the
life
cycle of a
lady bird
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ladybird
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and its anatomy. It is clear from the diagram that, a
ladybug
takes 30-35 days to become an
adult
.
According to
what is shown above, a
ladybug
goes through three phases before it
become
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becomes
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an
adult
, which
is
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are
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: the egg
stage
, the larva
stage
, the pupa
stage
, and
finally
the
adult
stage
. And we can notify that the longest
stage
is the larva
stage
where its duration is 21 days and the shortest one is
Egg
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the Egg
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stage
. There are eight parts in the
ladybug
anatomy. Each with its own purpose, A
ladybug
is an insect, a beetle actually ,and it has most of the same anatomical parts as every other
insects
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insect
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,
as well as
a few parts that are distinctive to the
ladybug
.
To sum up
, we could say that a
ladybug
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ladybug's
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life
cycle is not much different from the
life
cycle of a butterfly. You know what
adult
ladybugs look like, but you would not even recognize them before they get to that final
stage
of their
life
.
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