The charts below show the percentages of male and female students getting top grades in 1960 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The supplied bar graph compares the rate of male and female students with the highest grades in 1960 and 2000, in terms of science, arts, maths,
languages
and humanities
.
In the 60s, males got high
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females got high marks in several subjects , such
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languages
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of female students were
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digestibility
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, art and science had almost the same percentage of digestibility
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humanities
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