The graph below shows how people buy music. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows how people buy music. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the proportion of total people who buy music by three difficult methods in a 7 years-period commencing from 2011, reported every 1 year Generally speaking, it can
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seen that the percentage of music sold through downloads and CDs purchased were gradual decline
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by streams was a sharp increase over the given time period
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