The line graphs below show the production and demand for steel in million tonnes and the number of workers employed in the steel industry in the UK in 2010.

The first line graph compares

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steel

production

and the

demand

in the UK in 2010

while

the

second

one reveals the employee

number

in the industry in the same

year

.

Overall

, the

production

of

steel

was higher throughout the

year

than that of the

demand

except in December and the highest

number

of employees was employed in

this

industry at the beginning of the

year

.

According to

the first graph, the UK produced 4000

million

tonnes

steel

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in January 2010 and at that time the

demand

was exactly half of that. After the first quarter, the

production

and

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for

steel

remained almost the same.

At the end

of the

second

quarter, August, the UK’s

steel

production

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at just over 3 thousand

million

tonnes against a

million

tonnes less

demand

. From January to November, the

production

was higher than the

demand

and the gap between these two was on average a

million

tonne

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.

However

, the scenario shifted dramatically

at the end

of the

year

. From September to November,

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steel

production

plummeted and so did the

demand

. In December, the

demand

for

steel

exceeded the total

production

. The

second

line graph reveals that 5

million

employees worked in the

steel

industry and

this

number

dropped to two

million

less in April. From that time onward, the employee

number

showed some fluctuations and in August, the UK

steel

sector employed around 3.5

million

workers.

This

number

continuously dropped throughout the rest of the

year

and declined to 1

million

in December.