The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar graph represents how many people used
further
Correct article usage
the further
education
system by the
gender in the United Kingdom and whether they chose part-time or full-time studying Correct article usage
apply
method
over three different Fix the agreement mistake
methods
period
of time.
First of all, part-time studying was more popular Change to a plural noun
periods
in
men over Change preposition
among
aforementioned
years than full-time. Correct article usage
the aforementioned
However
, similar
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a similar
trend
was in women. Full-time educational systems showed upward
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an upward
trend
in both the
gender. But part-time Correct article usage
apply
education
fluctuated slightly in male
. Fix the agreement mistake
males
Number
of men reached the highest point at 1000 in part-time studying over 1970/71, Change the article
A number
The number
while
it got bottom at about 900 in 1980/81. The lowest period was 1980/81 when number
of men Change the article
a number
the number
student
dropped Fix the agreement mistake
students
at
900 in part-time Change preposition
to
education
.
Secondly
, during mentioned periods
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period
number
of women Change the article
a number
the number
student
showed Fix the agreement mistake
students
upward
Correct article usage
an upward
trend
both in part-time and full-time education
and year by year quantity
of students Correct article usage
the quantity
were
gradually increased. Part-times reached vertex at about 1100 Unnecessary verb
apply
at the end
of the period similar to full-time which peak
at 300. The Correct subject-verb agreement
peaks
second
higest
Correct your spelling
highest
trend
showed in 1980/81.Submitted by nanobashvilimariami5 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words education, trend with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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