The maps below show that the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The following maps demonstrate the
center
of a small Change the spelling
centre
town
named Islip as it is now, and although
plan for it's
Correct your spelling
its
further
refurbishment. The information is concise and coherent.
It is crystal clear that plan of
Islip Change preposition
for
Town
Center
consist
Correct subject-verb agreement
consists
various
Change preposition
of various
changes
. Currently
there Add a comma
,Currently
are
more Change the verb form
is
number of
shops in Correct quantifier usage
apply
countryside
and Correct article usage
the countryside
opposite
of it Correct article usage
the opposite
near
to housing. There is a big Add a missing verb
is near
park
on the South-East side
of the map which further
changes
to a small park
. On the East-side
there is a small school which further
remains same
on Correct article usage
the same
south-west
Add an article
the south-west
side
of
with a little bit Change preposition
apply
changes
.
A huge development in the shape of Change preposition
of changes
town
, previously in the down there is only one main Add an article
the town
raod
in between shops, which Correct your spelling
road
further
seems to be changed in pedestrian
way only. Add an article
a pedestrian
the pedestrian
Moreover
a great dual carriageway is planned around Add a comma
,Moreover
town
in circular shape with two path
on Change to a plural noun
paths
West
and East Correct article usage
the West
side
respectively. In
Change preposition
On
Correct article usage
the map
map
many progressions can be seen like bus stations ,shopping Add a comma
,map
center
, car Fix the agreement mistake
centers
park
etcetera. One new housing is also
on map
on North East Add an article
the map
side
which joins with dual
carriageway. There are some Correct article usage
a dual
changes
in the position of housing even one new housing is plan
near Wrong verb form
planned
park
.
Add an article
the park
a park
Overall
, a
great development Correct article usage
apply
changes
are there with new
dual carriageway bus station, shopping Correct article usage
a new
center
and Change the spelling
centre
carpak
Correct your spelling
carpal
car park
also
. The entire town
is now circular in shape.Submitted by abhay.kumar2443 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words center, town, changes, park, side with synonyms.
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