The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
linegraph
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line graph
line graphs
illustrate
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the past, current and projected
population
of the two
countries
which are
China
and
India
between 1990 and 2050.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that there is
and
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an
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upward trend for
both
countries
. The dotted line
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the trend of
China
while
the solid line
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the
population
of
India
. In 1990, the
population
of
India
were about 0.85
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billion
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billions
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billion
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of
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people
whereas
there was a huge
diffrent
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difference
different
from
China
with more than 1.1
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billion
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billions
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billion
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of
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people. In the
next
years, the
population
of
both
China
and
India
increased
steady
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steadily
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. In 2020, the inhabitants of
both
the
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countries
has
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a small difference,
China
were 1.4
billions
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billion
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and
India
were
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was
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1.3
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billion
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billions
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billion
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of
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people. The two lines describe the
population
of
both
the
countries
intersect
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each other in 20330 which remained that the
population
will be the same
this
year. It is projected that
China
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China's
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population
will start declining after 2030
while
India
will continue to increase and will reach
to
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1.6 million in 2050.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words population, countries, china, india, both, billions with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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