Some people think that school children need to learn practical skills such as car maintenance or bank account management along with the academic subjects at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some parents think school is the best place to gain knowledge and practical
skills
and this
should be the primary focus. Others want their kids to increase practical experiences by way of employment in addition
to academic knowledge. Both views have merit and I would agree with the latter side because it will give a head start to getting job experience and work
environment.
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Children
study in institute
to achieve wisdom to get admission Fix the agreement mistake
institutes
in
higher studies. They aim to enter better institutions after studies and struggle hard to achieve the best score. And so, it is important to boost more insight in the academy and develop Change preposition
to
problem solving
and independent thinking Add a hyphen
problem-solving
skills
, which can only be achieved through practice. For example
, earning a degree after high school always adds to getting a higher salary at work. Also
, external courses such
as bank governance can be done after completing studies and vehicle maintenance is unnecessary
skill since there are motor repair mechanics who do them.
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an unnecessary
Conversely
, children
learn and memorize better with practical skills
. They remember better when science, chemistry, physics
subjects are demonstrated to them Correct word choice
and physics
this
develops their skills
. Because they can grasp better, teaching non-theoretical subjects like automobile maintenance can be helpful in society as the car is now a means of transportation for everyone. Apart from
this
, getting into the real world and having skills
in fund administration would be essential in knowing financial markets and this
is another means of moneymaking assets. For instance
, working adults are dependent on cars for their commute to service and with a busy life, having intelligence of
auto maintenance will make life easier. Change preposition
in
In addition
, treasury business know-how helps in better money management as an adult. Alternatively, If practical skills
are not trained at an early age, especially the ones needed as adults, then
children
may be unable to relate theoretical lessons to the real world.
To conclude
, I agree that children
should be exposed to practical lessons such
as car care and bank management at school to help them excel in both areas.Submitted by cheryl.fox2020 on
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