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the chart below shows the changes in gross domestic product (GDP) in the western Cape between 2000 and 2010.

the chart below shows the changes in gross domestic product (GDP) in the western Cape between 2000 and 2010.
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The given line graph demonstrates the various percentages of Gross Domestic
product
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 (
GDP
) over a decade in the Western Cape.
Overall
, there are lots of ups and downs
are
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seen in
GDP
 from 2000 to 2010. There was
the
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a
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 fluctuation
of
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in
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GDP
 growth between 2000 to 2003 with
the
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a
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 scale
around
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 4
percent
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per cent
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. In 2004, it
then
 showed a sharp increase in
GDP
in
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 5.5
percent
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per cent
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.
In addition
, the
GDP
 growth was steady in
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 four years with slowly rose to reach
at
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 peak
to
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 over 6 % in 2007. Following the highest point, the
GDP
 dropped down dramatically and touched its lowest point which was a negative figure (-1.5 %) in 2009.
Afterward
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, it again suddenly jumped to 2.5% of
GDP
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the GDP
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next
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the next
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 year.
To sum up
, it clearly demonstrated from the graph that
although
 it was a positive trend in the first few years, Western Cape
also
 experienced negative Gross Domestic Product (
GDP
) growth.
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