The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The line graph illustrates
fish
and meat
consumption
in a European country from 1979 to 2004.
Overall
, the
consumption
of chicken showed a steady but significant rise over the
period
while
the usage of beef, lamb and
fish
experienced a downward trend. As can be seen from the graph the
consumption
of chicken was not the highest in 1979
however
it climbed steadily and reached around 250
grams
in 2004. The usage of
fish
remained stable throughout the
period
. There was a growth of
fish
, nearly 60
grams
per week in 1979,
although
it was the lowest
at the end
of the
period
. In 1979 the
consumption
of beef and lamb
were
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was
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nearly 220 and 150
grams
respectively.
The
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Beefs
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beefs
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beef
kinds of beef
slices of beef
portions of beef
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usage fluctuated
in
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at
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the beginning of
1980s
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the 1980s
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. The data
of
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on
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beef surpassed chicken until 1990 and
then
declined sharply, reaching nearly 100
grams
per week
at the end
of
period
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the period
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. In the meantime the
consumption
of lamb decreased gradually over the
period
, reaching about 60
grams
per week.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, consumption, period, grams with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
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