Some people think that government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view

Nowadays, a lot of researchers have been studying the importance of culture and The Arts in people's life, and they have realized that The Arts may change and improve how people think and do things in their lives.
However
, some governments have been thinking to lower the investment in the arts and use that money to invest in public service.
First
of all, I strongly believe that investments in the arts are very important because we need to form a thinking population not just people who act before thinking.
This
development of critical skill will help us to realize ways of doing things from another perceptive.
For instance
, there are many research in the world about the benefits of being involved with The Arts. Some of these benefits are can
saving
Suggestion
save
yourself and others from depressive episodes or even start playing an instrument. Of course I agree that investments in public service are essential,
thus
cannot eliminate or reduce the money for the arts.
Moreover both
Accept comma addition
Moreover, both
are vital for the population and governments need to consider keeping investments in both of them.
Although
some people think it is difficult to manage The Arts, I absolutely trust
that is
possible with hard work and talent people can administer and improve our society. To conclude, I strongly agree
in
Suggestion
with
keeping both investments. We need to think of another way to build more capital and finance the area of schooling that teaches analytical skills. If the government needs money, why not reduce the amount paid
to
Suggestion
for
politicians
Submitted by renae.peynado on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • enriching society
  • promoting cultural understanding
  • development of talent
  • creative industries
  • economic benefits
  • generate revenue
  • cultural heritage
  • identity
  • prioritize spending
  • needs of the majority
What to do next:
Look at other essays: