You have some time off work and are hoping to visit a close friend, Stephanie, for a few days.

Dear Stephanie, How are you? Myself and the whole family would like to extend our warmest greetings to you as well as your family. I’m writing
this
letter to know that I will be coming to your
home town
the town (or city) where you grew up or where you have your principal residence
hometown
for
this
year’s car festival. I’m taking
time
off from work for
next few days
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the next few days
and I will come by car and reach your place a day before the festival start. Your village festival has it
is
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been
own significance and creates wonderful surroundings. I liked it and eager to see it again. For
this
time
, I have planned some activities that we not enjoyed by us
last
time
because of the rain. We will start with Cooking
first
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first, then
then
followed wall painting, kite flying, colouring pots, and visiting
palace
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the palace
, circus and the Aquarium. And I
also
will bring my new digital camera to capture all the moments along with
this
I bought
new dress
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a new dress
for
this
festival to both of us.
This
time
we have more
time
to spend together in
this
occasion. See you soon
at
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in
your town. Yours faithfully, Rajeshanand
Submitted by Raj on

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