The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals, of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

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dinner

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43% of

sodium

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sugar

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sodium

has the most

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ratio

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the

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breakfast

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the

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lunch

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. the

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42% added

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sugar

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4Word repetition
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154 words

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Clear and correct grammar

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Topic Vocabulary:

Nutrients
Unhealthy
Daily intake
Percentage
Carbohydrates
Fats
Proteins
Meals
Balanced diet
Consumption
Excess
Health implications
Obesity
Diabetes
Heart disease
Convenience foods
Fast foods
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The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals, of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

Technology is being used more and more in education. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

Some people think reading stories in books is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Nowadays, a lot of people are able to do their work from home. Discuss both the advantage and disadvantages of this development.

Some people believe that children should not be given homework everyday, while others believe that they must get homework everyday in order to be successful at school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.