The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The provided two maps demonstrate the information regarding the
island
, before the construction and after the change of few tourist spots. At the
first
glance it is clearly seen that, during
year
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the year
2015, at the north side of the
island
there were
number
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a number
of
tree
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trees
, which are now converted into parking area.During the past years, in
east coastline
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the east coastline
of the
island
few rides and parks were made for play purpose and these rides are still remain same as they were in the past. Apart from
this
, in
middle
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the middle
of the beach a new hotel is introduced. Moving
further
, big statues are
also
built-up for the tourists, beside the hotel.
Moreover
, four swimming pools, which were in the corner of the parking area and remain stable, but
at
Suggestion
on
the left side of these swimming pools there was a garden
also
.But, in the present time, the garden is vanished into a laughing club with lots of seating section. Overall, in the past era, the
island
did not have many
facilities but
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facilities, but
after the
construction lots
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construction, lots
of new things had added for the tourists.
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