Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
In the current day buying different development of the
items
through the Internet
is becoming far more popular among the community.In my opinion, there are more merits about the Internet
,rather than demerits. From one perspective, some people
claim that purchasing things, such
as books, air tickets, groceries and other valuable items
by means of the Internet
serve
as a burning issue for Change the verb form
serves
the
humanity.Correct article usage
apply
Due to
improving technology more and more people
are becoming
to have worse Verb problem
beginning
habit
like laziness, nowadays. Many Fix the agreement mistake
habits
people
do not appreciate do
shopping on the Unnecessary verb
apply
Internet
, because they tend to think that without any information about the quality of item
it is worth Correct article usage
an item
to purchase
it. Change the verb form
purchasing
However
, making some purchases on the Internet
may probably be very comfortable for human lives, I think. From another perspective, withCorrect article usage
the
Internet
it Add a comma
Internet,
became
much more common for the community to buy essential belongings, whenever they want to have Wrong verb form
has become
it
, in my mind. Correct pronoun usage
them
Moreover
, there are some special sites, which belongs
to purchase Correct subject-verb agreement
belong
items
such
as Aliexpress and StyleShop, where any person is capable of making some purchases at any time. As well as
such
shoppings are available every single day.At present, a significant proportion of people
are becoming very busy because of their work, in that case
if they buy things on the Add the comma(s)
case,
Internet
without go
shopping, they would have a lot of spare time to be with close for Change the form of the verb
going
them
Correct your spelling
the
people
, in my view. Furthermore
, purchasing items
through the Internet
is very useful, especially in extra situations such
quarantine
times as in these days, for instance. By way of conclusion, the Change preposition
as quarantine
Internet
becomes as
the second helpmate among Change preposition
apply
people
even in terms of making necessary purchases, in my opinion.Submitted by Kamola on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite