Nowadays many students have the opportunity to study for part or all their courses in foreign countries .While studying abroad brings many benefits to individual students. Do you agree or disagree?

Education is building block or rather foundation for the students to become successful in life. There has been a paradigm shift in decisions of choosing the universities, nowadays students prefer to study abroad due to its various reaping benefits but
on the contrary
they have detrimental effects as well. Personally, I see eye to eye with the central idea. On one hand, Supporters believe that there are proven, evidences on the significant supremacy of foreign courses. With the plethora of advance research and practical approach towards imparting knowledge, which native's university lacks ultimately makes the foreign universities their top choice. There is a proven study, done by Howard University that reflects a 80 % increase of the international students in foreign countries all over the world.
Secondly
, degree holders are preferred by the top organisations. Evidently, due to their adaptability in the organisation's culture, communication skills and practical along with latest industry know how. To illustrate
,
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research done by leading Management schools
such
as Oxford, Yale and Howard are extensively adopted by top MNC's in the employees best practices and policies.
On the other hand
, due to change in the preferred place of study, local universities are losing their importance as well as business, which in return is leading to the brain drain.
For instance
, a student studying from aboard would prefer to work and settle in abroad. Apparently,
this
scenario has the detrimental effect on the respective country’s economy, because,
first
they spend on education, once become working professional,
then
, spend their earnings in a foreign land. Henceforth, the foreign countries have win win situation. To summarize, as there are two sides of the coin studying abroad has that too, albeit for the students it can be fruitful.
However
, the value of the learning system is downsizing. I think the Government should rework and reform teaching polices to stand at par with best foreign Universities.  To summarize, as there are two sides of the coin studying abroad has that too, albeit for the students it can be fruitful.
However
, the value of education system in their respective country is downsizing. I think the Government should rework & reform the education system in
such
way that it stand par with best Universities
.
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