The bar graph shows the percentage of households owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2010.
The bar chart illustrates how
much
Correct quantifier usage
many
households
in
owned and rented Change preposition
apply
accommodation
in two country
-Fix the agreement mistake
countries
in
England and Wales - Change preposition
apply
during
Change preposition
apply
the
from 1918 to 2011.
Correct article usage
apply
Overall
, what stands out from the chart that
the lowest proportion of Add a missing verb
is that
households
owning accommodation
had
in 1918, Unnecessary verb
apply
whereas
it hit a peak in 2001. Further
, the most percentage of households
renting accommodation
was experienced in 1918, itAdd the comma(s)
, however,
however
bottomed out in 2001.
As can be seen from the chart, the rate of households
in owned accommodation
started at just above 20% in 1918, which consider the lowest proportion. It came ranking
top with slightly under 70% in 2001, followed by 1991 which has a rate of approximately 70%.
Wrong verb form
ranked
On the other hand
, the percentage of household
in rented Fix the agreement mistake
households
accommodation
register
a substantial drop from 1918 to 2001, which account for almost 75% and slightly over Wrong verb form
registered
a
one-Correct article usage
apply
third
(30%). In addition
this
rate witness
a slow rise in the following years –between 2001 and 2011-.Wrong verb form
witnessed
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