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Your friend has had his/her first book published a few days ago. He/she has recently sent you a copy of that book.

#friend #first #book #copy
Dear Albert, I can’t express how excited I am to learn that you have your
first
book
 published. That’s a great feat and I congratulate you on
this
 brilliant achievement. I have got a copy of the
book
 you have sent me and I am so exalted to be one of the lucky persons to receive the
first
 edition of your
book
. I would like to take the chance to thank you for
this
. Just after getting the
book
, I started reading it and I have finished it within the
next
 24 hours. I must say that the
book
 is amazingly written and
it
it is
it's
 a fast-paced fiction that I have liked so much. I never knew you
have
Suggestion
had
such
 a great
story-telling
The act or practice of telling stories
storytelling
storyteller
 capability. Right from the cover illustration and the title, it took me deep into an enigmatic plot where each character had a profound role in mesmerizing its readers. The ending could not have been better. I am sure you will become a famous fiction writer someday. Many congratulations once again and I wish you every success as a writer. Take care. Warm wishes, William Roth
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