For some people, making a lot of money is an important goal. Others think that their free time is more important than wealth. Which is more important to you? Explain, giving specific reasons for your choice.
Some people think that earning a lot of
money
is a great goal in their lif
e both po
ints have their own positive as well as negative aspects. In my opinion, free Accept comma addition
life, both
time
is more important than making a lot of money
to lead a quality
life
. mon
ey ca
n be one of the strongest impulses of many of us. Suggestion
Money
However
, we need to remember that money
cannot make life
more meaningful. On the other hand
, free time
allows us to spend our lives higher quality
, which makes life
more valuable.
If a person has not spent quality
and valuable life
, a luxurious living does not matter much. However
, people still think that being wealthy will give people as much free time
as they want and this
free time
will undoubtedly bring happiness, surely thinking in this
way is inherent in the human being. They always say “If I became wealthy, I wouldn't bother working” but according to some research, although
not having to work is a financially comfortable situation, it can easily turn into riding the wind, disconnected with the world. Many people imagine that it would be like heaven, not to have to work, but progressing in career life
is an indicator of success for many of us, and without this
indicator, it is very difficult to accept that people make good use of their time
.
To sum up, wealth is not everything because you come to the world once and you never have the possibility to get back the time
spent. Therefore
, it is more valuable than money
to spend time
with your loved ones by having quality
time
and meaningful things. mon
ey ma
y buy anything but never buy Suggestion
Money
time
. No matter how wealthy you are, your wealth will not be enough time
to recover.Submitted by eslem b on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite