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You recently stayed with a childhood friend for a few days. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: Thank your friend for letting you stay with them. refer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him/her invite your friend to visit you

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Dear Rahul, Hi, I reached safely back home today morning. I am scripting, you
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 but would like to highlight one of the craziest things
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 have done in my life . Do you recollect on the way to your native we saw a Mango farm full of Mangoes we stopped and plunged the fence of the farm and climbed on the tree and plucked the Mangoes while we were relishing our booty the farm owner came running in look for us with a gun in his hand and we started running we barely managed to climb back the wall and get access to our car
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 I encourage you to visit my Place in Uttarakhand to do
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 to hear from you Regards Mukund
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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