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There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

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In the history of humanity, people always try to be happy.
Therefore they
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Therefore, they
 have found a different type of things to do that, and
music
 is one of them. The
music
 which was discovered by people who want to make happy themselves is one of vital thing the calm human soul.
Music
 which touches people’s emotions and hearts is power If people know how can they use it as a healer. When people feel upset, they compose some sad melodies.
In contrast
, when they feel happy, they compose nice melodies to make them happy. When
music
touch
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touches
 people’s heart, they feel relaxed, comfortable.
Furthermore
,
music
 can be rehabilitated for all of us. Traditional
music
 which reflecting features of cultures and countries is some kind of a sign to realize what the countries have to show other people about their culture. Traditional
music
 makes people stick together because these people who have a common point in the matter of traditional
music
 have many true to life stories.
On the other hand
, International
music
 is the only products of popular culture. It is like instant products. It is becoming popular suddenly and
then
 goes out rapid. People care these sort of
music
 just for a while.
On the other hand
, Traditional
music
 is a piece of cult
music
, it is never old. People can remember it whenever they listen. They can find some memories because of traditional
music
 because traditional
music
 reminds of people something which comes from their culture.
Therefore traditional
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Therefore, traditional
music
 is significant
then
 International
music
.
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