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When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree

#job #salary #consideration
Dear Sir/Madam
,
Accept space
,
 I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the loud construction noises coming from the street where I reside. I am Linda John, a school teacher, living in the Pearl apartment on Zayed street, for the past seven years. I get home from work at around 4PM daily and unfortunately,
this
 is the time when the workers start their repair job
of
from a particular thing or place or position
off
 the street. After a hectic day at, I wish to rest and relax in peace, which is not possible due to the constant banging and drilling. As I am unable to take a nap or unwind, I become restless
through out
all the way through
throughout
 the day, which is affecting the quality of my life seriously. It would be great if you could continue the construction work only during weekends. Alternatively, if it ought to continue during the weekdays, please adjust the timings to possibly early mornings.
This
 is the time where not only the weather is pleasant for the workers, but
also
 the majority of people are at school or work. I look forward to hearing back from you Yours faithfully Linda John
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consideration
  • sole factor
  • financial stability
  • security
  • motivating factor
  • dissatisfaction
  • demotivation
  • job satisfaction
  • overall well-being
  • fulfillment
  • work-life balance
  • flexible working hours
  • vacations
  • career growth opportunities
  • skill development
  • advancement
  • determining factor
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