Some say that the most important thing about being rich is that one has the opportunity to help others. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that helping others is one of the most essential issues in human life. In my opinion, helping others is a
significant
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significantly
important for a rich person. In
this
essay, I will
disscuss
to consider or examine in speech or writing
discuss
discus
aggrements
the statement (oral or written) of an exchange of promises
agreements
and
disaggrements
a conflict of people's opinions or actions or characters
disagreements
disagreement
about
this
subject. It is
obvios
easily perceived by the senses or grasped by the mind
obvious
that some people have a
supreior
of high or superior quality or performance
superior
finance
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financial
situations
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situation
than others. I
aggree
be in accord; be in agreement
agree
agreed
agrees
with the people who believe that helping others is a positive behaviour
such
that it gives them a self-loving feeling when they give some helps to others who are poors.
For instance
, consider someone who
can not
can not
cannot
afford to buy a computer, if you think you have sufficient money
hence
, you lend them some financial aid. Certainly, after doing that you will be proud of yourself because of being positively effective on that person's life.
However
, helping poor people can be considered as a humanity value, it may bother them
also
.
For example
, if someone helps other with a top-down or a master-slave view, surely it can bother them. From my point of view,
such
a helping is one of the most negative and bothering behaviours that a person can perform. In conclusion, helping other people can be considered a high value regarding the humanity and morality, even though it may bother people, if it is done in a wrong manner.
Therefore
the intent and quality of helping others
is
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are
significantly important either, as I think.
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