You are an alumnus (alumna) of a Bluegill University, registered in a volunteer program to conduct informal interviews with prospective students. Recently, an entrant has been assigned to you to have an interview.

Dear X, Hello. My name is Zulema Moreno, I´m
studing
reading carefully with intent to remember
studying
standing
at the Bluegil University and
also
, I´m a volunteer in the program with new prospectives. The reason why I´m
writting
the act of creating written works
writing
to you is to
scheedule
plan for an activity or event
schedule
a
Suggestion
an
interview in order
to known
Suggestion
is known
knows
is knowing
you and discover your motivation to study in the university.
This
interview will spend a few minutes (
aprox
approximately, approximate
approx
. 50 minutes) and
wil
the capability of conscious choice and decision and intention
will
be by Skype, so, if you have to cancel it at any moment, you can tell me and we will program again. If you are agree, I really
apreciate
recognize with gratitude; be grateful for
appreciate
appreciated
that you contact
to
Suggestion
with
me in order to select the day and time of the interview. My cell phone is 55 555 55 55. Thanks, Zulema Moreno
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