Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

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letter with regard to your advertisement in the Daily Times newspaper. I am interested to become a volunteer and can help you in running the charity event. I am keen on helping you because of my passion to help those who are needy. Your Organization provides free education to underprivileged

children which

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children, which

is a noble cause, and I want to help you in

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matter. As far as my experience is concerned, I volunteered for the victims of Japan's earthquake in 2014. Without anyone's assistance, I solely accumulated a donation of more than USD 50,000 in just ten days. I can help you in many ways. You can use my office premises for

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event which will save your cost and you can use

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amount in educating children.

Besides

, I have a vast network of donors and I can introduce your team to them. Should you need

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information, please do not hesitate to contact me. My mobile number is 1256845. I look forward to hearing back from you. Yours faithfully, Naresh Kumar

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

9 paragraphs

182 words

4.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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