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Some feel that countries should produce most of the food that is eaten in their country and import as little as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, there is an increasing rate of
countries
 that are importing goods to ensure that their citizens will have
a sufficient
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sufficient food
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food
 to support their daily essentials. Because of
this
 , some people believe that
countries
 should be self-sufficient in their
food
 production and
to
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demand commodities
such
 as
food
 in another country as little as possible.
However
 , it is uncertain to other
countries
,
the
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 economic implications are certain. To commence with, in a few
countries
, imported goods are simply a form of luxury, but
this
 contradicts
to
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those nations where it is a way of survival.
For instance
 , Middle Eastern
countries
,
is
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 not able to produce rice crops, because of the extreme weather,
the
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 availability of healthy soil for farming to produce rice grains which is a basic necessity is uncertain. In
this
 case, they have to import to other nearby
countries
 which will be suitable for their demands, some
countries
 like India, Pakistan and Egypt.
Besides
 ,
the
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modern technology these days
are
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 certainly well developed, wherein it
also
 allows to
grow
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crops
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of crops
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 with lesser water requirements.
However
 , it would be inhumane to starve citizens in
such
countries
 who are not able to produce enough fundamental needs.
Also
 , most of the
countries
 would be better served through vibrant
food
 cultivation and production industries. The economic result is twofold. First , farming, poultry and meat industries will
require
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 to hire farmers and meatpacking workers to be able to meet the large demands of crops and meat all over the world.
Secondly
 , these workers will
then
 contribute to the local economy by buying goods and services. In return, trading with international
food
 conglomerates will boost the country's inflation income.
To conclude
, with an exception in extreme cases,
countries
 should import fewer
food
 products to better serve their citizens economically.
However
 , as much as importing foods is necessary to support the basic needs of the nations, it should not supersede the local production.
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