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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The chart given below demonstrates the quantity of males and females in full time and part time study.
Firstly
, it needs to be observed that the total of men in part-time learning decreased in 1980 in comparison with 1970.
On the other hand
, women chose part-time studies more often in 1980 in comparison with 1970. The situation did not change in 1990 the figure of females in part-time schooling were still growing. The same situation was with the male students, their quantity increased in 1990, but was still lower than in 1970. The statistic of males in full-time
further
 study grew steadily from 190 to 1990. The quantity of women in full-time schooling increased slightly in the period of 30 years.
However
, the difference between the sum of students full-time and part-time learning was dramatically huge during these years. To summarize, it is obvious that the difference between full-time and part-time
further
 teaching is quite large, but the statistic of men and women in
further
 learning is almost on the same level.
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