some people think that children should be raised by all the family members(eg uncles, aunties, and grandparents) rather than only parent

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Suggestion

Certain

individuals believe that kids ought to be trained by

extented

relatively long in duration; tediously protracted

extended

members of their family

instead

of their biological parents alone. In my opinion,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

believe that kids should be groomed by their parent's relatives rather than they

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the parents) themselves. The reasons for my opinion would be discussed intensively in

this

essay below.

Youngstars

Suggestion

Young stars

are the future of the world as we all know and their

lifes

a characteristic state or mode of living

lives

are so delicate and they need to be

nutured

help develop, help grow

nurtured

neutered

with intensive care. They should be trained by their relatives not only by their parents because they tend to be more mature minded and self independent. They are able to think productively in solving real life situations without relying on anyone before providing solutions to any problem.

For instance

, my father grew up with his grandparent at some of his life and taught basic principles of how to handle situations and critically think on his own without support or necessarily depend on his parents. These helped him to be a man of his own. Another reason why children should be trained by their relations

instead

of their parents only is because they are trained in the ways that are acceptable to their culture and learn more about the traditions. They understand and are able to communicate with the local

diallet

the usage or vocabulary that is characteristic of a specific group of people

dialect

. The kids are well disciplined to live a life

that is

responsible and acceptable to the

customes

money collected under a tariff

customs

customers

of their society. To illustrate, research done by the students of the University of Nigeria shows that 80% of young individuals who grow up with their relatives are more responsible, well behaved and disciplined. They are about to express themselves more in their respective traditions and languages. In conclusion, kids should be trained by other members of the family

instead

of their own parents in my opinion, because they are more matured and self dependent, as well as more cultured and disciplined. All of these reasons

has been discussed

Suggestion

have been discussed

in details in the essay above.