Some people say history is one of the important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the modern world, some national argue that the fixing punishments of each sorts of infraction are the best policy for our community.
However
, other people argue that the process of fixed punishments is not a good style to control violation I think the punishment is a better way to solve all problems because in our community people will be awful before the crime.
Therefore
, in the coming paragraph I will explain both points. On the one hand, the fix punishment will have a deterring effect on our society. The individuals knowing that they will be subject to a certain punishment. If they are convicted with given case, and it will be reconsidered committing of
this
act in the
first
place.
For example
, In Saudi Arabia the people are very punctual because he knows that if he break any law
then
it will be punished.
Although
, they fix a retribution for bad habit.
on
Suggestion
On
the other hand, the taking the circumstances of a violation and its motivation into consideration is a prerequisite for establishing and ensuring justice and equity. So sometime it will wrong because they punished innocent people.
For instance
, A person kills for it self defence cannot be compared to the serial killer moving from one victim to the
next
. In conclusion, After analysing all the information I reached in my opinion and intermediary position between both solutions is the perfect approach to establish and ensure Justice and equity.
Furthermore
, think both are important to improve our society and evil rate in our community
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • revolutions
  • empowered
  • overcome
  • transform
  • advancements
  • collaboration
  • cooperation
  • diversity
  • fulfilling
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  • prosperity
  • enhance
  • foster
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