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Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing
this
 letter in connection with the educational trip to Mexico
that is
 being organized by the school. I would love to volunteer to go on the trip with the children. I would like to ensure the safety of all children, including Percy's.
Moreover
, I tutor high school students part-time, and I am familiar with making studies interesting and fun.
Additionally
,
this
 would be a perfect opportunity for me to gain
volunteering
Suggestion
volunteer
 hours that I require as a part of my work. I can assume the responsibility of counting the number of students that enter or exit a transport, including the flight and buses.
Additionally
, I can assist you
in
Suggestion
with
 accounting and keeping track of our costs along the way. As the trip is going to
last
 three days, I would appreciate it if you could guide me about the equipment that I need to bring.
Moreover
, I would like to request a copy of the itinerary and the food arrangement. I am looking forward to your reply.
 Yours sincerely, Mit Patel
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