You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken. Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter, describe the problem with the equipment explain what happened when you phoned the shop say what you would like the manager to do

Dear Sir, G. Roberts I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with one new washing machine that I bought two weeks ago in your
shop
. After purchasing the SanG 3500 at your
shop
, it was sent to my house three days later. At the moment that I received it, the specialist sent by you helped me to connect it properly, and
apparently
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it was working well. But after a week it stopped working, it didn't turn on when I pressed the button.
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day I called your
shop
and explained the situation. I was told that a technician was going to be sent in order to check the washing machine as
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son
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as possible.
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nobody has been sent so far and all that was four days ago. I was checking my purchase warranty and according to the policies of your
shop
, I have the right of a full refund if the washing machine fails during the
first
three months.
Therefore
to resolve
this
problem I would appreciate
to receive
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a full refund for my
purchasing
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.
Otherwise
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I will take legal
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about
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this
situation. Yours faithfully Cho Irgit
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