You recently bought something from a TV home shopping channel. The product that was delivered does not have the same specifications / functions as the one advertised on TV. Write a letter to the TV channel. In your letter; Say why and when you bought the item Say what is the difference / what is wrong with it Say what action you would like them to take
Dear Sir,
I am writing
you
to complain about the Change preposition
to you
coffee
machine
which I bought after watching your TV advertisement on weekend. I have been a loyal viewer of your TV home shopping channel for 2 years and placed numerous successful orders. However
, I am highly dissatisfied by
the product which I received yesterday on 7th July 2020.
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with
First
of all, model
of the Correct article usage
the model
machine
is not same
as it was advertised. I have received an old model Correct article usage
the same
machine
with a manual timer. Secondly
, coffee
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the coffee
a coffee
machine
is not multifunctioned
as Correct your spelling
multifunctional
multi functioned
it
was mentioned. It can only be used for hot Correct pronoun usage
apply
coffee
and its cold coffee
feature is not working at all. In addition
, there is some problem in
the mixer. I tried to make Change preposition
with
coffee
with the roasted beans but it was not mixed properly.
Due to all these deficiencies
I am very disappointed by Add a comma
,deficiencies
this
product. I would request you either to return me full
purchase price or provide me with the replacement.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully
Rabia YousafCorrect article usage
the full
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