Nowadays people are spending more time in workplace and staying away from home for work Discuss its advantages and disadvantages with your own experiences.
20th century is all about multinational companies and startups. The digital world is increasing its reach through the internet and has a direct impact on
work force
. Individuals achieving targets are required to spend more hours in office, Suggestion
the work force
this
has its advantages and disadvantages. Spending less time
with family and seeing growing them is the biggest disadvantage and in favour, overtimes are paid to employees for spending extra hours at the work
which in result help them pay the household expenses.
Over the past few years, the online or eCommerce companies are in demand and a majority of them operating and provide services for the individual's living in different cities and in a few cases in different countries. Such
companies require their employees to be available for long hours, if the company is in the services business, then
staff is required to facilitate the customer at any given point of time
. In such
cases the employee is forced to stay back in the office. The biggest benefit of staying back is the handsome salary, which eventually helps the parent to pay the bills and gives them the helping hand to afford all the luxury that is
required to live a good life
in a metropolitan city. I will add my experience as an example to support the above statement, I'm a project manager in a software house and one of the clauses in my job description is to be available throughout the week with flexible hours, to assist my clientele residing in different part of the world. However
, I get a salary which is above the industry standards, thus
it helps me pay my bills and it gives me pleasure to add more of my time
so that I can gain more.
Despite the fact that spending more time
at work
place leads to a better lifeline when we get paid a heavy salary but eventually it has an adverse effect as well. Depression, stress
is the biggest one to affect one's health. I work
on projects which requires me to spend 16 hours on a daily basis at work
, I miss spending time
with my two year old daughter, she is growing and the time
which she deserves the most with me I'm devoting it all at work
just to give my daughter a better future. I fear that, If I'm going to prolong this
work
style, I will finish up my getting a chronic disease and is because there is a lot of stress
and pressure of the project to be completed in time
. My fathers have set an excellent example for me, he used to come home in the evening and spend time
the family and he used to live a happy life
without stress
.
To conclude, spending more time
at the workplace does not lead to a life
full of stress
but it all boils down as to how the person is managing his time
and is focused on working on priorities which will help him live a happy life
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