You want to hold a surprise party for a friend who is visiting his home town after a long time from a foreign country. Write a letter to a common friend asking for his help in organizing the party and in your letter: • Write the reasons for organizing the party • Describe when, where and how you would be organizing the party • Ask your friend to meet you in person for further discussions You do not need to write any addresses.

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Dear Sonia, I hope you are doing well and I am writing

this

letter to let you know that our best friend Puja is returning from Canada to her home back after a long time period, so, I am very glad to know that we could meet her again. Along with

this

, I want to express my happiness and excitement by organizing a surprise party for her, in which, I need your help.

Consequently

, the party will be

week Monday at my house, So that, we have to complete entire tasks like decorations ,gifts and food before her arrival.

Moreover

, You will manage the music and seating arrangements for guests.

In addition

, I want you to visit my place as soon as possible for

further

discussions like what type of gift should we present

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her

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and we have to prepare a dance performance for

this

party. I would be grateful if you could help me with

this

. Best regards, Bhawna

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7 paragraphs

161 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Greeting and closing

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

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Clear and correct grammar

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