Nowadays celebrities earn more money than politicians. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

Undoubtedly, many evidences prove more earning of the
celebities
a widely known person
celebrities
celebs
than the politicians. While some people are still of negative view. I will discuss both advantages and disadvantages with the
countries
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country's
countries'
development. There
are
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is
a plethora of reasons for famous personalities earning and devoting more
money
than the leaders. As the visibility of audience has increased globally, more and more events
are been taking
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are taking
place
world wide
involving the entire earth; not limited or provincial in scope
worldwide
. Many rich companies are coming forward for hiring a
professionals
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professional
like sport men, actor
etc
, for advertisement. Before launching a new product, a personality
is called
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calls
for promotion, in return larger chunk of
money
is earned and some proportion is given in the form of taxes to the government for
countries
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countries'
country's
development whereas the
money
earned by a leader is not taxable under the law. To sustain in future, the Hot star
offer
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offers
much of the
money
as
donation
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a donation
for a noble cause while the political party devote
money
to only show
there
of them or themselves
their
personal objective.
Moreover
, famous people earn
money
for their fame and personalties but leaders get most of their income by corruption mode and illegal means only. If the actor's have more
money
, they will use it for a noble
cause but
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cause, but
the politicians will only show their power and interfere in country's decision making. Many sincere leaders, due to
shorage
the property of being an amount by which something is less than expected or required
shortage
of
money
are forced to move towards dishonest means of earning income. In hindsight, famous personality earnings are more
favorable
encouraging or approving or pleasing
favourable
than the political person. They can improve the economic development of our
country but
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country, but
authority only forces a dedicated person with short of
money
to either quit or move toward illegal means of earning
money
.
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